tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post6060824080399007432..comments2023-04-27T07:44:53.136-04:00Comments on Groundwire: RedundancyKimberlee Turleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04695299361596799423noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post-83677917288767744582011-10-05T14:27:31.170-04:002011-10-05T14:27:31.170-04:00Don't forget redundant dialogue tags.
"B...Don't forget redundant dialogue tags.<br /><br />"But mom, I hate split pea soup." he whined.<br /><br />"Get out of the way!" he yelled.Mark Fengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01922616270777907779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post-17694748985271811772011-10-05T09:07:14.580-04:002011-10-05T09:07:14.580-04:00I'm guilty! My writing is wordy, because I wa...I'm guilty! My writing is wordy, because I want the reader to see exactly what I'm seeing. I'm getting better at it though....I hope.No Onehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07802794822033933906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post-27137625787393120822011-10-03T22:15:37.754-04:002011-10-03T22:15:37.754-04:00The last ones you talk about are the ones I always...The last ones you talk about are the ones I always find in my roughs, especially redundancy where a better verb would suffice. Really helpful post!julie feddersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06621537183935460781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post-87407892721254890932011-10-03T17:55:31.299-04:002011-10-03T17:55:31.299-04:00i'm beta reading a MS right now that is just f...i'm beta reading a MS right now that is just full of redundancy. I'm doing a lot of cuttingSarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.com