tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post930144711064490768..comments2023-04-27T07:44:53.136-04:00Comments on Groundwire: Show & TellKimberlee Turleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04695299361596799423noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post-41073752033685721922011-09-17T15:11:37.424-04:002011-09-17T15:11:37.424-04:00BTW I'm having difficulty following the blog. ...BTW I'm having difficulty following the blog. Will keep working on it!Melindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11542106414099032742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post-72158465849590535372011-09-17T15:11:04.821-04:002011-09-17T15:11:04.821-04:00Awesome post! Loved the visuals too. :)Awesome post! Loved the visuals too. :)Melindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11542106414099032742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post-48410385500634870132011-08-22T07:59:47.602-04:002011-08-22T07:59:47.602-04:00Great post! This is one of those things that I hav...Great post! This is one of those things that I have to work with. I'm such a teller! =DDonna K. Weaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15763832177263927311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post-47417262220444392112011-08-21T00:46:29.649-04:002011-08-21T00:46:29.649-04:00I'm guilty of committing the "looked"...I'm guilty of committing the "looked" crime. :/ <br />Luckily, I have awesome crit partners who find them and flog me for over usage. :) <br /><br />Lots of useful info here. Great post!Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526192448146446752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post-80575390094368840412011-08-20T08:46:49.857-04:002011-08-20T08:46:49.857-04:00yeah, i'm with julie. My rough drafts always c...yeah, i'm with julie. My rough drafts always contain a lot of "he was sad" or tevs. BUT! That's why i love the find option in word. It's one of the first changes i make when i'm doing line edits. I just search for all the "he was" or "he felt" etc until i've fixed all the ones that need fixingSarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396595894553223446.post-77536277440864416112011-08-19T14:36:44.337-04:002011-08-19T14:36:44.337-04:00My roughs always contains tons of "he looked&...My roughs always contains tons of "he looked". And as soon as I see them I scream and chop away. Great post!julie feddersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06621537183935460781noreply@blogger.com